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Katie: /* Cho-Hacha */

2026-10-15T10:15:56Z

Cho-Hacha

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	***The Forge		***The Forge
	****Back-dust space bar on a space station - Lax oversight by ATIC allows The Forge to operate with impunity. Frequented by space freighters who travel around the planet.		****Back-dust space bar on a space station - Lax oversight by ATIC allows The Forge to operate with impunity. Frequented by space freighters who travel around the planet.
	****A neon ~~green~~ light sign states the name, on a particularly decrepit building with ~~its own space dock~~ (full of absolute wrecks of ships). The dock is a wire mesh platform in a cavernous hall with a sign reading ‘Wait here for Shuttle to Main Planet’ in Cho-Hachan. A single narrow corridor leads from the platform, ending in a dead end with three shimmering black voids, each edged by a metal frame and a sign above, reading ‘Machine Room’, ‘Research Lab’ and ‘The Forge’. The portals blink red if locked.		****A neon white light sign states the name in Cho-Hachan and Atopian, on a particularly decrepit building with multiple docks for ships (full of absolute wrecks of ships). The portals blink red if locked.
	****Ground floor - Pitch black doorway (portal) with blue lines floating across it, embedded in stone wall. The lines go orange when the portal has no power. Going inside, the ground floor is square with black stone tables, cheap mismatched chairs. A long bar is on the wall to the right of the portal, there’s graffiti on the wall with the entrance portal, another portal to floor 1 is on the wall to the left of the bar, dim and dusty orange and blue lights. Neon signs on the wall and exposed thick, black wiring.		****Ground floor - Pitch black doorway (portal) with blue lines floating across it, embedded in stone wall. The lines go orange when the portal has no power. Going inside, the ground floor is square with black stone tables, cheap mismatched chairs. A long bar is on the wall to the right of the portal, there’s graffiti on the wall with the entrance portal, another portal to floor 1 is on the wall to the left of the bar, dim and dusty orange and blue lights. Neon signs on the wall and exposed thick, black wiring.
	*****The bar is long, with an array of drinks dispensers, each in a coin-operated bubble-like container, with multicoloured glasses beside them.		*****The bar is long, with an array of drinks dispensers, each in a coin-operated bubble-like container, with multicoloured glasses beside them.

Katie: /* Cho-Hacha */

2026-10-06T10:16:30Z

Cho-Hacha

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	*****The final room is lit by neon stripes stuck to wall, has a very small bar with blue lights and there are large red barrels attached to the wall behind it. Pyramid designs on some of the walls, big circles on other parts. There’s a karka machine, a huge screen with a computer that’s bulky and grey like it was made in 1980s with lots of colourful buttons and knobs. The room is sound-proofed. There are long metal benches, some are covered in orange or white fur, with round glass tables.		*****The final room is lit by neon stripes stuck to wall, has a very small bar with blue lights and there are large red barrels attached to the wall behind it. Pyramid designs on some of the walls, big circles on other parts. There’s a karka machine, a huge screen with a computer that’s bulky and grey like it was made in 1980s with lots of colourful buttons and knobs. The room is sound-proofed. There are long metal benches, some are covered in orange or white fur, with round glass tables.
	****Floor 2 - the portal leads out to a corridor that is identical to floor 1		****Floor 2 - the portal leads out to a corridor that is identical to floor 1
	*****The Control room is opposite the portal and contains panels, power sources, wires, cables, beer kegs, giant metal cannisters with pipes leading from them to the wall, a toolbox.. Metal storage lockers emitting purple light. An open, metal briefcase with various controls inside including a number pad next to a switch with a red cover and a red light - a super-powered popper, military grade.		*****The Control room is opposite the portal and contains panels, power sources, wires, cables, beer kegs, giant metal cannisters with pipes leading from them to the wall, a toolbox.. Metal storage lockers emitting purple light. A huge device with red lights is plugged into an open, metal briefcase with various controls inside including a number pad next to a switch with a red cover and a red light - a super-powered popper, military grade.
	*****Bar manager’s office – contains a desk filled with clutter including a mug, a receipt, a white ball lamp, a pot of pencils, and multiple screens filled with CCTV imagery. There are small shelves on the wall displaying sculptures with triangular frames behind.		*****Bar manager’s office – contains a desk filled with clutter including a mug, a receipt, a white ball lamp, a pot of pencils, and multiple screens filled with CCTV imagery. There are small shelves on the wall displaying sculptures with triangular frames behind and a large back storage cabinet beneath.
	**At least two moons – the second moon is used for trading		**At least two moons – the second moon is used for trading
	**There is also another port, between the moons		**There is also another port, between the moons

Katie: /* Cho-Hacha */

2026-10-06T10:03:48Z

Cho-Hacha

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	****Floor 2 - the portal leads out to a corridor that is identical to floor 1		****Floor 2 - the portal leads out to a corridor that is identical to floor 1
	*****The Control room is opposite the portal and contains panels, power sources, wires, cables, beer kegs, giant metal cannisters with pipes leading from them to the wall, a toolbox.. Metal storage lockers emitting purple light. An open, metal briefcase with various controls inside including a number pad next to a switch with a red cover and a red light - a super-powered popper, military grade.		*****The Control room is opposite the portal and contains panels, power sources, wires, cables, beer kegs, giant metal cannisters with pipes leading from them to the wall, a toolbox.. Metal storage lockers emitting purple light. An open, metal briefcase with various controls inside including a number pad next to a switch with a red cover and a red light - a super-powered popper, military grade.
	*****Bar manager’s office – contains a desk filled with clutter and CCTV imagery.		*****Bar manager’s office – contains a desk filled with clutter including a mug, a receipt, a white ball lamp, a pot of pencils, and multiple screens filled with CCTV imagery. There are small shelves on the wall displaying sculptures with triangular frames behind.
	**At least two moons – the second moon is used for trading		**At least two moons – the second moon is used for trading
	**There is also another port, between the moons		**There is also another port, between the moons

Katie: /* Cho-Hacha */

2026-10-06T09:37:24Z

Cho-Hacha

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	*****The final room is lit by neon stripes stuck to wall, has a very small bar with blue lights and there are large red barrels attached to the wall behind it. Pyramid designs on some of the walls, big circles on other parts. There’s a karka machine, a huge screen with a computer that’s bulky and grey like it was made in 1980s with lots of colourful buttons and knobs. The room is sound-proofed. There are long metal benches, some are covered in orange or white fur, with round glass tables.		*****The final room is lit by neon stripes stuck to wall, has a very small bar with blue lights and there are large red barrels attached to the wall behind it. Pyramid designs on some of the walls, big circles on other parts. There’s a karka machine, a huge screen with a computer that’s bulky and grey like it was made in 1980s with lots of colourful buttons and knobs. The room is sound-proofed. There are long metal benches, some are covered in orange or white fur, with round glass tables.
	****Floor 2 - the portal leads out to a corridor that is identical to floor 1		****Floor 2 - the portal leads out to a corridor that is identical to floor 1
	*****The Control room is opposite the portal and contains panels, power sources, wires, cables, beer kegs, giant metal cannisters with pipes leading from them to the wall, a toolbox, a ~~huge device plugged into machinery behind some cables covered in tubes~~ and ~~metal components~~.		*****The Control room is opposite the portal and contains panels, power sources, wires, cables, beer kegs, giant metal cannisters with pipes leading from them to the wall, a toolbox.. Metal storage lockers emitting purple light. An open, metal briefcase with various controls inside including a number pad next to a switch with a red cover and a red light - a super-powered popper, military grade.
	*****Bar manager’s office – contains a desk filled with clutter and CCTV imagery.		*****Bar manager’s office – contains a desk filled with clutter and CCTV imagery.
	**At least two moons – the second moon is used for trading		**At least two moons – the second moon is used for trading

Katie: /* Cho-Hacha */

2026-10-06T09:30:34Z

Cho-Hacha

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	*****The bar is long, with an array of drinks dispensers, each in a coin-operated bubble-like container, with multicoloured glasses beside them.		*****The bar is long, with an array of drinks dispensers, each in a coin-operated bubble-like container, with multicoloured glasses beside them.
	****Floor 1 - The portal to floor 1 opens on a hallway, there is a portal to floor 2 at the other end of the hall, on the same side. Orange strip lights run along the floor. Opposite there are four doors along the wall:		****Floor 1 - The portal to floor 1 opens on a hallway, there is a portal to floor 2 at the other end of the hall, on the same side. Orange strip lights run along the floor. Opposite there are four doors along the wall:
	*****A seemingly empty room (opposite the portal to ground floor) with no working lights. There is a pattern made up of ridged squares on the walls – it is an ex-holo room ~~and~~ has a secret door that leads to a dark ~~stairwell up to~~ the ~~next floor and~~ a ~~dark corridor with~~ a ladder to a vent in the control room in the floor above		*****A seemingly empty room (opposite the portal to ground floor) with no working lights. There is a pattern made up of ridged squares and triangles on the walls – it is an ex-holo room, the shimmerer has been removed. One of the triangles can be twisted (there are scratch marks on the wall from it's movement) to reveal a secret door that leads to a dark corridor with thick ducts along the wall. There's a large, silver, metal storage container in the hall. There's a metal ladder that goes up to a vent in the control room in the floor above.
	*****Upper bar - blue neon light coming from the bar, which is smaller than the ground floor bar. Cheap tables surround the edges of the room with two chairs each. No windows, little decoration on the walls other than metal sheets with circular cut outs and vents with wires coming from them. Dusty. The floor is scratched and damaged.		*****Upper bar - blue neon light coming from the bar, which is smaller than the ground floor bar. Cheap tables surround the edges of the room with two chairs each. No windows, little decoration on the walls other than metal sheets with circular cut outs and vents with wires coming from them. Dusty. The floor is scratched and damaged.
	*****A room similar to the others, with a round, brass table and metal chair in it. Machines on the wall with wires coming up for communicators		*****A room similar to the others, with a round, brass table and metal chair in it. Machines on the wall with wires coming up for communicators

Katie: /* Cho-Hacha */

2026-10-06T08:30:57Z

Cho-Hacha

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	*****Upper bar - blue neon light coming from the bar, which is smaller than the ground floor bar. Cheap tables surround the edges of the room with two chairs each. No windows, little decoration on the walls other than metal sheets with circular cut outs and vents with wires coming from them. Dusty. The floor is scratched and damaged.		*****Upper bar - blue neon light coming from the bar, which is smaller than the ground floor bar. Cheap tables surround the edges of the room with two chairs each. No windows, little decoration on the walls other than metal sheets with circular cut outs and vents with wires coming from them. Dusty. The floor is scratched and damaged.
	*****A room similar to the others, with a round, brass table and metal chair in it. Machines on the wall with wires coming up for communicators		*****A room similar to the others, with a round, brass table and metal chair in it. Machines on the wall with wires coming up for communicators
	*****The final room is lit by neon stripes stuck to wall, has a very small bar with blue lights and there are large red barrels attached to the wall behind it. Pyramid designs on some of the walls, big circles on other parts. There’s a karka machine, a huge screen with a computer that’s bulky and grey like it was made in 1980s with lots of colourful buttons and knobs. The room is sound-proofed.		*****The final room is lit by neon stripes stuck to wall, has a very small bar with blue lights and there are large red barrels attached to the wall behind it. Pyramid designs on some of the walls, big circles on other parts. There’s a karka machine, a huge screen with a computer that’s bulky and grey like it was made in 1980s with lots of colourful buttons and knobs. The room is sound-proofed. There are long metal benches, some are covered in orange or white fur, with round glass tables.
	****Floor 2 - the portal leads out to a corridor that is identical to floor 1		****Floor 2 - the portal leads out to a corridor that is identical to floor 1
	*****The Control room is opposite the portal and contains panels, power sources, wires, cables, beer kegs, giant metal cannisters with pipes leading from them to the wall, a toolbox, a huge device plugged into machinery behind some cables covered in tubes and metal components.		*****The Control room is opposite the portal and contains panels, power sources, wires, cables, beer kegs, giant metal cannisters with pipes leading from them to the wall, a toolbox, a huge device plugged into machinery behind some cables covered in tubes and metal components.

Katie: /* Cho-Hacha */

2026-10-06T08:25:43Z

Cho-Hacha

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	*****Upper bar - blue neon light coming from the bar, which is smaller than the ground floor bar. Cheap tables surround the edges of the room with two chairs each. No windows, little decoration on the walls other than metal sheets with circular cut outs and vents with wires coming from them. Dusty. The floor is scratched and damaged.		*****Upper bar - blue neon light coming from the bar, which is smaller than the ground floor bar. Cheap tables surround the edges of the room with two chairs each. No windows, little decoration on the walls other than metal sheets with circular cut outs and vents with wires coming from them. Dusty. The floor is scratched and damaged.
	*****A room similar to the others, with a round, brass table and metal chair in it. Machines on the wall with wires coming up for communicators		*****A room similar to the others, with a round, brass table and metal chair in it. Machines on the wall with wires coming up for communicators
	*****o The final room is lit by neon stripes stuck to wall, has a very small bar with blue lights~~, pyramid~~ designs on some of the walls, big circles on other parts. There’s a karka machine, a huge screen with a computer that’s bulky and grey like it was made in 1980s with lots of colourful buttons and knobs. The room is sound-proofed.		*****The final room is lit by neon stripes stuck to wall, has a very small bar with blue lights and there are large red barrels attached to the wall behind it. Pyramid designs on some of the walls, big circles on other parts. There’s a karka machine, a huge screen with a computer that’s bulky and grey like it was made in 1980s with lots of colourful buttons and knobs. The room is sound-proofed.
	****Floor 2 - the portal leads out to a corridor that is identical to floor 1		****Floor 2 - the portal leads out to a corridor that is identical to floor 1
	*****The Control room is opposite the portal and contains panels, power sources, wires, cables, beer kegs, giant metal cannisters with pipes leading from them to the wall, a toolbox, a huge device plugged into machinery behind some cables covered in tubes and metal components.		*****The Control room is opposite the portal and contains panels, power sources, wires, cables, beer kegs, giant metal cannisters with pipes leading from them to the wall, a toolbox, a huge device plugged into machinery behind some cables covered in tubes and metal components.

Katie: /* Cho-Hacha */

2026-10-05T13:56:34Z

Cho-Hacha

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	*****A seemingly empty room (opposite the portal to ground floor) with no working lights. There is a pattern made up of ridged squares on the walls – it is an ex-holo room and has a secret door that leads to a dark stairwell up to the next floor and a dark corridor with a ladder to a vent in the control room in the floor above		*****A seemingly empty room (opposite the portal to ground floor) with no working lights. There is a pattern made up of ridged squares on the walls – it is an ex-holo room and has a secret door that leads to a dark stairwell up to the next floor and a dark corridor with a ladder to a vent in the control room in the floor above
	*****Upper bar - blue neon light coming from the bar, which is smaller than the ground floor bar. Cheap tables surround the edges of the room with two chairs each. No windows, little decoration on the walls other than metal sheets with circular cut outs and vents with wires coming from them. Dusty. The floor is scratched and damaged.		*****Upper bar - blue neon light coming from the bar, which is smaller than the ground floor bar. Cheap tables surround the edges of the room with two chairs each. No windows, little decoration on the walls other than metal sheets with circular cut outs and vents with wires coming from them. Dusty. The floor is scratched and damaged.
	*****A room with ~~old school phone booths~~.		*****A room similar to the others, with a round, brass table and metal chair in it. Machines on the wall with wires coming up for communicators
	*****The final room is lit by neon stripes stuck to wall, has a huge screen ~~and~~ computer that’s bulky and grey like it was made in 1980s ~~(karka machine),~~ and is sound-proofed.		*****o The final room is lit by neon stripes stuck to wall, has a very small bar with blue lights, pyramid designs on some of the walls, big circles on other parts. There’s a karka machine, a huge screen with a computer that’s bulky and grey like it was made in 1980s with lots of colourful buttons and knobs. The room is sound-proofed.
	****Floor 2 - the portal leads out to a corridor that is identical to floor 1		****Floor 2 - the portal leads out to a corridor that is identical to floor 1
	*****The Control room is opposite the portal and contains panels, power sources, wires, cables, beer kegs, giant metal cannisters with pipes leading from them to the wall, a toolbox, a huge device plugged into machinery behind some cables covered in tubes and metal components.		*****The Control room is opposite the portal and contains panels, power sources, wires, cables, beer kegs, giant metal cannisters with pipes leading from them to the wall, a toolbox, a huge device plugged into machinery behind some cables covered in tubes and metal components.
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	**Local authorities are called polis.		**Local authorities are called polis.
	*Technology		*Technology
	**~~Phone booths~~ - in The Forge – ~~old school phone booths that use~~ Geordi La Forge-style visors covering eyes and ears		**Communicators - in The Forge – Geordi La Forge-style visors covering eyes and ears, made of a silver metal band with orange lights at the front
	**Karka machine - karaoke		**Karka machine - karaoke

Katie: /* Cho-Hacha */

2026-10-05T12:13:54Z

Cho-Hacha

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	****Back-dust space bar on a space station - Lax oversight by ATIC allows The Forge to operate with impunity. Frequented by space freighters who travel around the planet.		****Back-dust space bar on a space station - Lax oversight by ATIC allows The Forge to operate with impunity. Frequented by space freighters who travel around the planet.
	****A neon green light sign states the name, on a particularly decrepit building with its own space dock (full of absolute wrecks of ships). The dock is a wire mesh platform in a cavernous hall with a sign reading ‘Wait here for Shuttle to Main Planet’ in Cho-Hachan. A single narrow corridor leads from the platform, ending in a dead end with three shimmering black voids, each edged by a metal frame and a sign above, reading ‘Machine Room’, ‘Research Lab’ and ‘The Forge’. The portals blink red if locked.		****A neon green light sign states the name, on a particularly decrepit building with its own space dock (full of absolute wrecks of ships). The dock is a wire mesh platform in a cavernous hall with a sign reading ‘Wait here for Shuttle to Main Planet’ in Cho-Hachan. A single narrow corridor leads from the platform, ending in a dead end with three shimmering black voids, each edged by a metal frame and a sign above, reading ‘Machine Room’, ‘Research Lab’ and ‘The Forge’. The portals blink red if locked.
	****Ground floor - Pitch black doorway (portal) with blue lines floating across it, embedded in stone wall. The lines go orange when the portal has no power. Going inside, the ground floor is square with black stone tables, cheap mismatched chairs. A long bar is on the wall to the right of the portal, there’s graffiti on the wall with the entrance portal, another portal to floor 1 is on the wall to the left of the bar, dim and dusty lights. Neon signs on the wall and exposed thick, black wiring.		****Ground floor - Pitch black doorway (portal) with blue lines floating across it, embedded in stone wall. The lines go orange when the portal has no power. Going inside, the ground floor is square with black stone tables, cheap mismatched chairs. A long bar is on the wall to the right of the portal, there’s graffiti on the wall with the entrance portal, another portal to floor 1 is on the wall to the left of the bar, dim and dusty orange and blue lights. Neon signs on the wall and exposed thick, black wiring.
	*****The bar is long, with an array of drinks dispensers, each in a coin-operated bubble-like container, with multicoloured glasses beside them.		*****The bar is long, with an array of drinks dispensers, each in a coin-operated bubble-like container, with multicoloured glasses beside them.
	****Floor 1 - The portal to floor 1 opens on a hallway, there is a portal to floor 2 at the other end of the hall, on the same side. Orange strip lights run along the floor. Opposite there are four doors along the wall:		****Floor 1 - The portal to floor 1 opens on a hallway, there is a portal to floor 2 at the other end of the hall, on the same side. Orange strip lights run along the floor. Opposite there are four doors along the wall:

Katie: /* Cho-Hacha */

2026-10-05T12:11:02Z

Cho-Hacha

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	**Space station (artificial satellite) orbiting the planet - shaped like a moon, metallic, with buildings built on the surface in two thick lines that divide it into quarters, all identical black cubes, spaceships parked around them.		**Space station (artificial satellite) orbiting the planet - shaped like a moon, metallic, with buildings built on the surface in two thick lines that divide it into quarters, all identical black cubes, spaceships parked around them.
	***The Forge		***The Forge
	****Back-dust space bar on a space station - Lax oversight by ATIC allows The Forge to operate with impunity.		****Back-dust space bar on a space station - Lax oversight by ATIC allows The Forge to operate with impunity. Frequented by space freighters who travel around the planet.
	****A neon green light sign states the name, on a particularly decrepit building with its own space dock (full of absolute wrecks of ships). The dock is a wire mesh platform in a cavernous hall with a sign reading ‘Wait here for Shuttle to Main Planet’ in Cho-Hachan. A single narrow corridor leads from the platform, ending in a dead end with three shimmering black voids, each edged by a metal frame and a sign above, reading ‘Machine Room’, ‘Research Lab’ and ‘The Forge’. The portals blink red if locked.		****A neon green light sign states the name, on a particularly decrepit building with its own space dock (full of absolute wrecks of ships). The dock is a wire mesh platform in a cavernous hall with a sign reading ‘Wait here for Shuttle to Main Planet’ in Cho-Hachan. A single narrow corridor leads from the platform, ending in a dead end with three shimmering black voids, each edged by a metal frame and a sign above, reading ‘Machine Room’, ‘Research Lab’ and ‘The Forge’. The portals blink red if locked.
	****Ground floor - Pitch black doorway (portal) with blue lines floating across it, embedded in stone wall. The lines go orange when the portal has no power. Going inside, the ground floor is square with black stone tables, cheap mismatched chairs. A long bar is on the wall to the right of the portal, there’s graffiti on the wall with the entrance portal, another portal to floor 1 is on the wall to the left of the bar, dim and dusty lights. Neon signs on the wall and exposed thick, black wiring.		****Ground floor - Pitch black doorway (portal) with blue lines floating across it, embedded in stone wall. The lines go orange when the portal has no power. Going inside, the ground floor is square with black stone tables, cheap mismatched chairs. A long bar is on the wall to the right of the portal, there’s graffiti on the wall with the entrance portal, another portal to floor 1 is on the wall to the left of the bar, dim and dusty lights. Neon signs on the wall and exposed thick, black wiring.